Comic 24 - He CAN handle the truth!
Average Rating: 5 (1 votes)
- Main Cover Page
- The Tomb Robber
- On location!
- Digging for treasure!
- An Entity watches
- What's that buzzing sound
- Giant Alien Wasps!
- Apparently he is not a big fan of wasps!
- Here they come!
- Fast on the draw!
- Looks like a hit!
- Smells like burned wasp!
- Just made it angry!
- Fighting Retreat!
- So that's where the 3rd one went!
- Trying To React In Time!
- Oh how it stings!
- Oooo Trippy!
- Falling
- At rest
- Part 2 : Kendrick's Quest
- Bad news
- What if he can hear us?
- He CAN handle the truth!
- Bluntness!
- Kelly not being blunt
- Kendrick agrees with Kelly
- We want the truth!
- Walt and Kendrick talk
- Kendrick ready to go!
- And so the chase begins!
- Still on the run
- Kendrick chasing!
- And the chase continues
- Escaping down the stairs!
- Still running!
- Lost in the Chaos !
- Near Room 205!
- Kendrick gets interrupted!
- And one micro-second later. . .
- . . . For a price
- A Change of Scene!
- Wanted to stay!
- Get Home Fast !
- It's coming closer!
- The Chase Ends!
- Where is It?
- Lumi finds the Hunter!
- An Encounter!
- You weren't there
- Not Willy's business!
- He just wanted to give a gift!
- Willy's Crystal
- Pretty Crystal !
- Lumi reacts!
- Poof ! Goes the Crystal
- Not gods but demons!
- Who have you been talking to ???
- I wanna talk to the Demon!
- Tandi asks a question.
- Distractions!
- The Dregs of Society!
- We like a few cracks in our glass walls!
- Never mix business with pleasure!
- Wizard++
- "Comsic Entities!"
- Offer of help!
- A view of the whole gang
- No wizards for Willy. . .
- Keeping the "Fallen Ones" out of the Sanctum
- Somethings a good disintegration is just the thing. . .
- Oriab, avoiding the wrath of the Blue-One!
- Willy finds the Wizard's terms objectionable!
- Talking about the Wizard!
Comments:
25th May 2018, 10:02 PM edit delete reply
Although the original concept I had didn't have that much of an armored nature. . . . Here are a few reference images that indicate what I was originally going for :
https://static.comicvine.com/uploads/original/5/54353/3056989-flash+gordon+-+electric+tiki+statue_side+views_color_10x-lrg.jpg
https://i.pinimg.com/736x/8e/b2/f1/8eb2f10a2cacf28b28d6f2841d7ebd3c--alternative-comics-comic-art-community.jpg
https://i.pinimg.com/736x/8c/e7/e6/8ce7e6506728883598803912a7ab26de--flash-gordon-space-opera.jpg
It would be nice to find some hybrid design that keeps the feel of my original vision, but also gives a more armored look. I'll have to see what I can come up with. . . .
25th May 2018, 11:25 PM edit delete reply
I think if you just made his pants black that would "anchor" the look of his ensemble better and add variation, black is a visually heavier color than red, and none of your examples have matching pants and shirt colors. The uniform color doesn't work as well.
You could still add armor padding to the leg region to make it look meatier, but perhaps make it look like its sewn in to indicate a faster, lighter weight armor, like the leather armor that a rogue or thief wears for instance.
26th May 2018, 12:16 AM edit delete reply
Your advice is very much appreciated, and also very accurate. :-)
Although, the current situation makes me think that a bit more time needs to be taken with the design of things. I think I'll take this weekend off from posting new pages, in order to look over the various design options, and hopefully get something I really like. I'm definitely going to take your advice on the pants, those do need to be a different color, and black would be a good option for that. The leg armor is also a great idea.
I'll work on it today, and see what I can come up with.
26th May 2018, 12:11 PM edit delete reply
Oh, wait-a-minute, it is free to read, like mine.
Never mind me then. Lol
26th May 2018, 4:10 PM edit delete reply
Regarding your comment : you may not be paying me, but I very much appreciate your interest in my comic, and that you take the time to comment.
So I feel bad about letting down those of you who take the time to read my comic.
Anyway, I did a bunch of 2D sketches of various outfits for Kendrick today. And then some 3D modeling for the character. I'm still not entirely happy, but it feels like I'm making progress.
26th May 2018, 11:53 PM edit delete reply
31st May 2018, 6:16 AM edit delete reply
As always, I very much appreciate your feedback on this stuff, so if you really hate the Warlock shoulder things, let me know. . . .
31st May 2018, 9:48 PM edit delete reply